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FryRulz
19-06-2008, 02:25 PM
As im not sure the competition is now going ahead iv decided to just post my entry now, so as not to waste it.


Title- Fry's Calling

plot


In New New York everything is quite, while Fry and Bender are on the coach drinking beer and eating pizza watching tv. Leela and Amy are on the tanning beds for the dates they are going on for that night.
However on the system of The Death
Knox.The leader Lord Tallis has created a army far worse than anything ever seen in the galaxy, flesh eating birds!
As they decend on New New York, terror arises as humans and aliens alike are soon being eating alive.
Meanwhile back at Planet Express, Professor Farnsworth gives the news to Fry, Bender and Leela. That Zapp Brannigan has ordered all available ships to go and fight the enermy.
As Fry, Leela and Bender set off to fight the enermy. Amy gets news that Kif has been sent by Zapp to try and do fake negotians to distract the enermy for the attack. However Kif has been taking hostage, and as she feels shes the only one that can save him. Amy sneeks on the ship, as the Planet Express heads to Lord Tallis's base in Madison Square Gardens. (MSG)
While flying over the city to MSG, the group see the devastation caused. All around NNY, half eating bodies lay everywhere. While being surronded by buildings that has been destroyed.... The end is near...
As the group lands at MSG, Fry, Leela and Bender go to fight the monsters, while Amy sneeks off in search of kif.
As battle commences, all around Fry, Leela and Bender. People begin to get slaughered, by the monsters. While trying to duck from body parts flying everywhere. Leela decides shes had enough as they will be killed, so she orders Fry and Bender back onto the ship. However just as she gives the orders, one of the monsters snatches her. As Fry trys to hold on to Leela, another monster attacks Fry making him lose his grip on Leela.
As Frys runs back to the planet Express to take chase, he decides to ask Zapp for help. But when Zapp refuses to help him. Fry knows theres only one thing he can do, he must go to The Dead Knox to rescue the love of his life.
Meenwhile back at the battlezone, Amy finds a near dead and torn apart Kif. As she makes her way to him, Kif shouts at Amy to look out. But just as she turns, one of the monsters graps her and as she begins to scream. Kif must watch her get eating alive, then theres silence. As a second monster swoops down and kills Kif.
Meanwhile back with Fry and Bender, they eventually arrive at The Death Knox.
As they both sneek into the main base, they are meet by an army of killerbots. As Bender attacks, he gives Fry enough time to escape to carry on the mission to find Leela.
Eventually Fry finds Leela tied against a rock above a pit of lava. He shouts out to her and begins to run towards her. But as Leela shouts at Fry to get back, Lord Tallis comes from nowhere and strikes a bloody blow against Fry.
As the two stare at each other, the final showdown is about to erupt...
As a very bloody battle commences between the two, Fry is getting over powered. As he lays on the floor in a bloody state with blood gushing everywhere.
Lord Tallis gives gives Fry a way out from death. Fry may return to 1999 and survive as long as Leela dies.
However Fry makes one last attack at Lord Tallis causing a rifted in time.
As the whole Planet begins to crumble, Bender runs in with his ass on fire!! Seeing this as his only chance to save Leela.
Fry grapes hold of Lord Tallis, knowing what must be done..... He must sacrifice himself to kill Tallis and save his friends.
As Fry orders Bender to rescue Leela, Fry is holding back Tallis with all his strengh.
As Leela and Bender go to escape, Leela looks back at Fry. For that one split second as both sets of eyes connect, love meets them both in the eyes.
Just as Bender and Leela escape the planet onboard the Planet Express. The planet explodes with Fry still on it holding back the one threat to the whole universe.
As Fry and Tallis begin to get crushed in time, they finally land at the end of time just as the universe is about to emplode on itself, killing them both.
Meanwhile back on board the Planet Express, both Leela and Bender are overcome with the loss of Fry. One the loss of his best friend. The other, the loss of the one she loved but never admitted to it....

The End

FryRulz



author comments

This episode was ment to be about sacrifice, and would you put yourself in danger and even death to save the ones you love. Unlike other futurama episodes, i decided to make one much darker, with blood and loss.

Lucorio
19-06-2008, 02:31 PM
WOW! that was awesome mate!!!!

FryRulz
19-06-2008, 02:48 PM
Thanks mate, i wish i had more time to finish it off completly

frys_red_jacket
19-06-2008, 05:15 PM
that sounds like it would have been good

Leela+Fry
20-06-2008, 06:26 PM
Awesome. Nothing else needs to be said.

FryRulz
20-06-2008, 06:27 PM
Thanks mate, there is places i could improve on though.

TK-421
21-06-2008, 05:13 AM
That's pretty good mate, really dark though! Nice one!

FryRulz
21-06-2008, 05:16 AM
Thanks mate, yeh i prefere writing darker plots. Most of my plots on year 5000 are really dark, with lots of deaths as well as dark feelings in characters. I think dark plots are alot better than happy ones

Kenny McCormick
21-06-2008, 09:20 AM
needs more action

FryRulz
21-06-2008, 02:11 PM
More action, its got a few scenes with deaths as well as the ending. It was only a 20 min job.

Aquarius
21-06-2008, 04:03 PM
More action, its got a few scenes with deaths as well as the ending. It was only a 20 min job.

20 minutes???
Imo you should put more time into it and be more descriptive.

FryRulz
21-06-2008, 04:07 PM
Well i was rather busy at the time with college work, and i do know how to write plots etc. Seeing as i have written my own show.

Aquarius
21-06-2008, 04:13 PM
Well i was rather busy at the time with college work, and i do know how to write plots etc. Seeing as i have written my own show.
Proof or it didnt happen.:cowboy:

FryRulz
21-06-2008, 04:17 PM
Proof of what?

Aquarius
21-06-2008, 04:18 PM
You've written for a show.

FryRulz
21-06-2008, 04:21 PM
It hasnt gone into production yet, but everyone on here knows about it.

Aquarius
21-06-2008, 04:22 PM
Well I don't so, proof?

FryRulz
21-06-2008, 04:27 PM
Why are you dismissing everything im saying, thats not really polite of a new member.

I cant 100% prove it till its made, but im posting stuff about it soon.

Aquarius
21-06-2008, 04:28 PM
Oh your in Finland so I will probably never see it unless you upload it somewhere.

FryRulz
21-06-2008, 04:30 PM
I live in england but on a break out there, and once it finally gets made there will be links.

Aquarius
21-06-2008, 04:32 PM
You should go to America imo. Like in the Uk I heard they arrest you for criticising the government.

FryRulz
21-06-2008, 04:35 PM
Im moving out of UK one day anyway

Aquarius
21-06-2008, 04:37 PM
Thats good, i mean there is more opportunity in America, no offense to anyone else.

FryRulz
21-06-2008, 04:40 PM
Well i do hope to put forward my show to someone in america aswell as my othr plans

frys_red_jacket
21-06-2008, 05:00 PM
You should go to America imo. Like in the Uk I heard they arrest you for criticising the government.

can't say ive heard of that one, im always criticising them and haven't been jailed

FryRulz
21-06-2008, 05:01 PM
Yeh same here, i critise them all time nothing has happened to me. I think its only if you say you hate them and you are going to bomb them o internet or something then you would do.


ALso as much as i would like to talk about this, i dont really want to go off topic anymore

Aquarius
21-06-2008, 05:02 PM
Also the UK is afraid of firearms.

FryRulz
21-06-2008, 07:25 PM
Anyway * off topic*

hinkerdinque
21-06-2008, 09:37 PM
boring fanfic, but in saying that i couldn't do much better

FryRulz
22-06-2008, 05:52 AM
Well other members appeared to like it, exactly you wouldnt beable do much better. If i wanted to id put scripts and much deeper plot into it, but then poeple wouldnt of read it if it was way to long.

Aquarius
22-06-2008, 11:28 AM
boring fanfic, but in saying that i couldn't do much better

Listen to his criticism, like I said more action.:cowboy:

Leela+Fry
23-06-2008, 10:41 PM
Pfft, yeah right, look at all the action! Fry, don't listen to these haters. It rocked.

Lucorio
23-06-2008, 10:43 PM
yeah fry, dont take criticism from those banned noobs! they probaly smell bad!

FryRulz
24-06-2008, 01:20 PM
Pfft, yeah right, look at all the action! Fry, don't listen to these haters. It rocked.

yeah fry, dont take criticism from those banned noobs! they probaly smell bad!


Thanks you two, that honestly does meen alot to me:)

Lucorio
24-06-2008, 01:22 PM
no problemo,if they mess with you they mess with me or the mods :P

FryRulz
24-06-2008, 02:11 PM
Haha yeh thanks bud, same with you. Just dont listen to castleman, il get him sorted out.

Leela+Fry
25-06-2008, 12:22 AM
Castleman sucks, he called me lame because I commented on my new member thread :D
Yeah, if anyone else puts ya down, I'll be here to put them down

HYPNoBRECKY
05-08-2008, 10:11 PM
Fry, Kif, and amy All dead... Wow! This could be an XBOX adventure! Cool, FruRulz:thumb: