NovaMist
04-01-2008, 04:51 PM
Hi everyone,
Waaaaaaaaaay back when, I used to write an awful lot of fanfic. Looking back on it - quite a bit of it, really lol - some of it is a little cringe-worthy, and some of it is pretty all right. I even wrote a few Futurama fics...and no I am not telling you which ones they are! lol Most of them have been lost in cyberspace, but I think there's at least one of them still on Fanfiction.net in the Futurama section (http://www.fanfiction.net/cartoon/Futurama/10/0/1/1/0/0/0/0/0/1/) under an old pen name of mine that I now can;t even remember...
Anyway, back to the point (wow, Alexa has a point! Alert the press! lol) - I'm finally doing what I hope is the final rewrite of a fic that was planned out after I saw The Cryonic Woman for the first time in about 2001 (can't rush these things!). What I really is need is a beta-reader/editor person (all my usual suspect editor people don't know enough about Futurama, damnit!) to just have a look over my fic and tell me what the hell is wrong with it lol - are they all in character? Is there too little dialogue and too much exposition? Is the damn thing too long, like I think it is, taking too long to get to the point?
Any help would be highly appreciated, and those kind enough to be assist will be decalred my new god and have a shrine dedicated to them on my desk :)
Thanks guys! :)
Waaaaaaaaaay back when, I used to write an awful lot of fanfic. Looking back on it - quite a bit of it, really lol - some of it is a little cringe-worthy, and some of it is pretty all right. I even wrote a few Futurama fics...and no I am not telling you which ones they are! lol Most of them have been lost in cyberspace, but I think there's at least one of them still on Fanfiction.net in the Futurama section (http://www.fanfiction.net/cartoon/Futurama/10/0/1/1/0/0/0/0/0/1/) under an old pen name of mine that I now can;t even remember...
Anyway, back to the point (wow, Alexa has a point! Alert the press! lol) - I'm finally doing what I hope is the final rewrite of a fic that was planned out after I saw The Cryonic Woman for the first time in about 2001 (can't rush these things!). What I really is need is a beta-reader/editor person (all my usual suspect editor people don't know enough about Futurama, damnit!) to just have a look over my fic and tell me what the hell is wrong with it lol - are they all in character? Is there too little dialogue and too much exposition? Is the damn thing too long, like I think it is, taking too long to get to the point?
Any help would be highly appreciated, and those kind enough to be assist will be decalred my new god and have a shrine dedicated to them on my desk :)
Thanks guys! :)