Kigents
26-07-2011, 02:20 AM
Ok im writing on my stories
Didnt know where else to post it.
First time writing so..
First chapter.
I was sitting silently on the edge of my bed. I stood up and watched out a windows the wind and rain was just crazy. Wind bending the trees to their braking point and rain just pouring down. All of a suddenly all of it went quiet. I could only hear clock ticking. Click-Clack. And then blinding bright light flashed over the sky. I was blinded by it and i turned away. Trying to get some sight back. I rubbed my eyes and as i turned my head back up. Wind had broken one of the trees and it was falling right into my window. My pupils dilated and i turned away. It all seemed to happen in slow motion. I took to steps and i jumped out of the way. Tree came with such a force that it shattered the windows of the entire floor. There were screaming and moaning. When i opened my eyes it was morning, i was covered in shrapnel of the house. Tree had demolished half of the wall. I stood up and swept myself clean. I noticed that my clock had stopped working. I just thought it was because of a tree. I checked my wristwatch and it didn't work either. I tried to boot up my computer but it didn't work either. I started to panic a little. It seemed the none of the electric devices weren’t working. I took my phone just in case, my knife and flashlight. I tried to open the door but it was jammed, it was one of those electrical doors so why it should work when everything else is down. So i tried to pull it open. Single stupid thing I’ve ever done. I pulled on the handle and i broke. I slipped on the water soaked floor, almost felling out of the window. I pulled myself up. I managed to break of a leg of the table. I tried to wedge open the door. No use. I looked around and o saw a hatch in the ceiling. I took everything that i could find, made it to a pile and tried to climb up. But it was locked. I climbed down and i almost gave up. Until i saw a hammer under the rubble. I went to the door and started to beat the crap out of it. And amazingly it worked, door opened. I stepped out, everything seemed strangely quiet. I had a feeling the something wast quite right. I started running towards exit. I pushed open the door and there was really bight outside. I looked around and there were no people. It seemed like everybody just vanished. Cars just stood in the middle of the road peoples thing were laying around. I panicked and jumped into my car. At least the car is working i thought to myself. I raced out of there, everywhere i looked there were empty cars, building. There were nobody. I just drove and drove until i reached the Leaving Las Vegas sign. I came out of the car and looked upon the city and it was empty. No people, no birds, no nothing. Just emptiness. I got down on my knees and yelled „What is going on here“. After a while i stood up i hear something. Like a helicopter sound. I ran towards it. Over the hill and i stopped. What i saw i couldn't believe it. I closed and opened my eyes again. There it was, a huge ship about 350 - 400 meters in length hovering over the dunes. The ship looked like a big bundle of spikes. But the thing was, I have seen that ship before and i knew that that wasn't good, if they were here. So I stepped back and i fell off the hill. I rumbled down the hill and got on my feet and rushed to my car. I drove to the nearest gun shop i could find, broke the window and stepped inside. I grabbed guns: M4, M16, .50 Cal Rifle, couple of shotguns and grenades, and a lot of ammo. I noticed that it had gone dark, too dark for the time of the day, it almost felt like and eclipse. I tapped my watch couple of times and it still didn't work. But that was impossible because it didn't run on electricity, it was a special kind of watch. So i packed up all the things, threw them into the trunk and drove to nearest building. I took my things and barricaded myself on the top floor. I had a clear overview of the entrance. I was woken up by some sound, I opened my eyes and look out the window. I didn’t see anything. I got went out of the room to find some food. When i closed my door, there were some people walking in the hallway. I panicked and aimed at one guy.
„Who are you?“
He looked me like i was a crazy man and answered „I'm the cleaner“.
Cleaner: „Now just relax, put down the gun and lets talk.
Me: „What are you doing here, whats going on?“
Cleaner: „You're in a Hotel, no need to point guns“
Me: „Wha..
Security guards tackled me from behind and they hit me so hard that i passed out. I woke up in a cell, my head hurt like somebody had hit it with a hammer. Could it be , could it be just a dream..i wondered. A police officer came to me and said.
Police officer: „So you're the guy who randomly points guns huh? Do you even have a license to that?“
Me: „No, whats going on here?“
Police officer: „Your were probably drunk and got that weapon somewhere and tried to kill a hotel cleaner, that's what is going on here.“
Could it just been my imagination, no, no that was too real. My past coming to hunt me.
Me: „No i wasn't drunk, i can explain.. I didn’t even finish that sentence until a bomb exploded in police station. The shock wave blew me against the wall and i lost consciousness. To be continued.
Didnt know where else to post it.
First time writing so..
First chapter.
I was sitting silently on the edge of my bed. I stood up and watched out a windows the wind and rain was just crazy. Wind bending the trees to their braking point and rain just pouring down. All of a suddenly all of it went quiet. I could only hear clock ticking. Click-Clack. And then blinding bright light flashed over the sky. I was blinded by it and i turned away. Trying to get some sight back. I rubbed my eyes and as i turned my head back up. Wind had broken one of the trees and it was falling right into my window. My pupils dilated and i turned away. It all seemed to happen in slow motion. I took to steps and i jumped out of the way. Tree came with such a force that it shattered the windows of the entire floor. There were screaming and moaning. When i opened my eyes it was morning, i was covered in shrapnel of the house. Tree had demolished half of the wall. I stood up and swept myself clean. I noticed that my clock had stopped working. I just thought it was because of a tree. I checked my wristwatch and it didn't work either. I tried to boot up my computer but it didn't work either. I started to panic a little. It seemed the none of the electric devices weren’t working. I took my phone just in case, my knife and flashlight. I tried to open the door but it was jammed, it was one of those electrical doors so why it should work when everything else is down. So i tried to pull it open. Single stupid thing I’ve ever done. I pulled on the handle and i broke. I slipped on the water soaked floor, almost felling out of the window. I pulled myself up. I managed to break of a leg of the table. I tried to wedge open the door. No use. I looked around and o saw a hatch in the ceiling. I took everything that i could find, made it to a pile and tried to climb up. But it was locked. I climbed down and i almost gave up. Until i saw a hammer under the rubble. I went to the door and started to beat the crap out of it. And amazingly it worked, door opened. I stepped out, everything seemed strangely quiet. I had a feeling the something wast quite right. I started running towards exit. I pushed open the door and there was really bight outside. I looked around and there were no people. It seemed like everybody just vanished. Cars just stood in the middle of the road peoples thing were laying around. I panicked and jumped into my car. At least the car is working i thought to myself. I raced out of there, everywhere i looked there were empty cars, building. There were nobody. I just drove and drove until i reached the Leaving Las Vegas sign. I came out of the car and looked upon the city and it was empty. No people, no birds, no nothing. Just emptiness. I got down on my knees and yelled „What is going on here“. After a while i stood up i hear something. Like a helicopter sound. I ran towards it. Over the hill and i stopped. What i saw i couldn't believe it. I closed and opened my eyes again. There it was, a huge ship about 350 - 400 meters in length hovering over the dunes. The ship looked like a big bundle of spikes. But the thing was, I have seen that ship before and i knew that that wasn't good, if they were here. So I stepped back and i fell off the hill. I rumbled down the hill and got on my feet and rushed to my car. I drove to the nearest gun shop i could find, broke the window and stepped inside. I grabbed guns: M4, M16, .50 Cal Rifle, couple of shotguns and grenades, and a lot of ammo. I noticed that it had gone dark, too dark for the time of the day, it almost felt like and eclipse. I tapped my watch couple of times and it still didn't work. But that was impossible because it didn't run on electricity, it was a special kind of watch. So i packed up all the things, threw them into the trunk and drove to nearest building. I took my things and barricaded myself on the top floor. I had a clear overview of the entrance. I was woken up by some sound, I opened my eyes and look out the window. I didn’t see anything. I got went out of the room to find some food. When i closed my door, there were some people walking in the hallway. I panicked and aimed at one guy.
„Who are you?“
He looked me like i was a crazy man and answered „I'm the cleaner“.
Cleaner: „Now just relax, put down the gun and lets talk.
Me: „What are you doing here, whats going on?“
Cleaner: „You're in a Hotel, no need to point guns“
Me: „Wha..
Security guards tackled me from behind and they hit me so hard that i passed out. I woke up in a cell, my head hurt like somebody had hit it with a hammer. Could it be , could it be just a dream..i wondered. A police officer came to me and said.
Police officer: „So you're the guy who randomly points guns huh? Do you even have a license to that?“
Me: „No, whats going on here?“
Police officer: „Your were probably drunk and got that weapon somewhere and tried to kill a hotel cleaner, that's what is going on here.“
Could it just been my imagination, no, no that was too real. My past coming to hunt me.
Me: „No i wasn't drunk, i can explain.. I didn’t even finish that sentence until a bomb exploded in police station. The shock wave blew me against the wall and i lost consciousness. To be continued.